Monday, June 3, 2013

Treatment

Marie Carpenter is a twenty six year old white woman. She has long auburn hair which she keeps up in a bun during most of the day. She only lets it hang loose at night or on days where she feels free, which isn’t often for her. It is very thick. Her forehead is covered with bangs. Her eyebrows are plucked and arched. Her sky blue eyes are large and doe like. She has wrinkles around her eyes from smiling and bags beneath them from her sleepless nights. Her nose is small and her lips are thin.  She barely wears make up. Her body frame is slender but she does have a slight stomach fat problem from eating too much ice cream on Fridays and Saturdays. She is 5’6 in feet. She has a scar on her left knee from getting excited about salad and while fetching it, she tripped on the brick stairs.
            Marie was born on July 9, 1986. She is a Cancer and follows those traits. She was born in Pina, Oklahoma. It was a small town where everyone knew everyone. Her parents Frank and Jane were town social lights. She was shy growing up and only had one true friend named Alan. Marie was not as popular as her sister Stacy in high school. Stacy could work a room in ten minutes while Marie couldn’t get their attention for ten minutes. She focused on her studies rather than her social skills. She graduated Pre- Law and got a full ride to law school. Her college years involved studying hard. She didn’t attend parties. She became a divorce lawyer and found job opportunities in Panama City, Florida. She begged Alan to come with her because she didn’t want to be alone. He complied and opened up a vet hospital. She shares a luxury apartment with Ellen Lopez which she calls her “E”.
            Ellen Lopez is a Hispanic woman who is twenty four. Her hair is very long and thick resembling a raven’s feathers. She has a large forehead which she hates. Her eyes are dark brown but mysterious. She always has something behind them. Her eyebrows are thick and curved.  Her nose is a bit flat. Her lips are always plump from lip plumper and she uses heavy makeup. Her body shape is curvy. She has an almost hourglass figure and uses it to lure the men.
            Ellen was born on August 28, 1989. She is a Leo. Her lively attitude lighted up San Diego beaches as she spent most of her time there. She was the sixth child of ten. Her parents Rosa and Juan Lopez usually had other things on their minds that didn’t include their party and boy crazy daughter. Ellen found comfort in booze and boys throughout her high school years. Her older brother Eddie bought her all the drinks and drugs she wanted. At seventeen she realized she needed a job so she sought one. She got an office job at one of many San Diego’s reality office. She fell in love with job and went on to become a realtor. She found a job in Panama City. She was looking for a roommate and found Marie in a classified ad in the newspaper. The apartment fit her budget and style so she moved in.
            Luke Hillsworth is very handsome. He drips with good looks. His olive skin and dark green eyes combines to make the perfect match. He is twenty eight and has few wrinkles. His hair is normally slicked back but not gelled too much. He makes men and women alike turn heads. His face is very rugged and has sharp features. He is in perfect shape and can run miles if needed to.
            Luke was born on October 28, 1987 in Salam, Oregon. Luke’s birth name is Rico Latoni. At a very young age Luke’s parents Frances and Tony noticed him talking to things that weren’t there. They were too poor to seek help for child and thought it would go away with time. Luke hid it from his parents but it still affected him. He was quite in school and only had one friend Anse. One day Luke and Anse got into a fight when Luke told him he was a spy. Luke got so infuriated at Anse that he killed him. Luke was sentenced to ten years in a psychiatric ward. Once he got out he skipped probation and moved west to Florida. He adopted the name Luke and worked at an insurance company and he quickly moved up due to his people skills that centered from his looks. He is now a man of money and many faces.
            Alan Bentley is twenty-six and still has adorable boyish looks. His blonde hair is normally in a foe hawk. His eyes are dark blue with untrimmed eyebrows that are brown. His smile is his key feature. It lights up a room and makes him noticeable. He is very tall standing at 6’4 and is very gawky. He has some muscle on him but not much.
            Alan was born on December 29,1986 in Pina, Oklahoma. He is a born leader as his sign is a Capricorn. Marie and Alan have been lifelong friends. Their parents were good friends and they grew up together. Alan has always been Marie hard rock. He is deeply in love with her but won’t tell her because he doesn’t want to ruin what they already have. When Marie asked him to move with her, he couldn’t say no. He could never say no her.
            The first scene starts with Marie dealing with her fighting clients. They are fighting about who gets to keep a dog. She looks very bored and ends up settling the argument with comprise. Marie is very smart and had to think on her feet.
Scene two is Marie talking to E about her life. Marie is eating ice cream right out of the gallon tub without shame. E tells her she’s in a funk and asks about Alan. Marie denies anything is between them. E tells her of this really hip club that she wants Marie to go to with her. Marie reluctantly agrees.
            Scene three starts with them at the bar in the club. E is throwing back drinks while Marie is just sipping on hers. Marie looks uninterested in what is being put before her. She feels out of place. E asks her if she’s having fun and Marie lies and says yes. E knows she’s not so she tells her she has a little surprise for her. Luke appears. He is dashingly handsome and Marie goes gaga over him. She gets really nervous and Luke looks confident. They talk for a bit and Luke gets a phone call. He says he has to take it and comes back. He looks sort of frazzled by the call but continues flirting.
            Scene four is Marie and Luke on their first date. They are hitting off. They find things in common about their childhood and places they’d like to visit. Luke is lying about it all but Marie can’t tell. Marie is smitten with him. They night goes on and Marie drops spaghetti on her white dress and Luke comments that if Captain Chem had been here that wouldn’t have happened. Marie takes it as a joke and laughs it off. The night ends with a kiss.
            Scene five is Luke and Marie on a date months later.  It’s the end of the date and Luke suggests to go back to Marie’s place. Marie agrees and they go. They make up and you see them undress. Then it cuts to Marie waking up. Luke is sound asleep. She sees the clothes all over her room and decides to clean them up. As she starts to fold Luke’s clothes, he wakes up. He starts yelling at her for touching his clothes. He then calms downs and apologizes. He leaves and kisses her on the head. Marie is left looking confused.
            Scene six is Marie and Alan talking in her apartment. She tells Alan of Luke’s behavior. Alan tells Marie that it isn’t normal and Luke is no good for her. Marie laughs and asks if he’s jealous not knowing he actually is. He gets mad. Marie doesn’t understand why. She questions him about it. Alan finally confesses he loves her. Marie doesn’t know how to take it. Alan says forget about it and storms off. Marie calls Luke for comfort.
            Scene seven Luke comes over. He offers to make her some tea to calm her nerves. While she venting, he slips drugs into her drink. Marie drinks the tea and starts to feel dizzy. She collapses into Luke’s arms.
Scene eight is when she awakes. She is tied up. She has been beaten. There are cuts on her arms. She has no idea what has happened. She looks and Luke is dressed up as a superhero. He has underwear over a spandex body suit and a cape to complete the outfit.  He talks in an evil voice saying no one can save her now not even Captain Chem. He cuts her cheek with a knife until Alan walks in apologizing. He sees Marie tied up and charges at Luke.  Luke and him wrestle. Luke looks like he’s about to win by choking Alan, but Alan kicks in right in the nads. Alan then goes and grabs a pan that is hanging above the stove and bangs it against Luke’s head. Alan unties Marie and she clings to him.
            Scene nine starts with cops asking questions. Luke is being pulled away and he looks at Marie. He says. “I was only trying to save you.” The cops shut him up and he is put into a cop car. Marie just clings to Alan and E is right by her side. E feels completely responsible. The cop explains who he actually is. Marie cries for letting her get that close with a psycho.
            Scene nine is Marie and Alan at a park with a new dog months later. You see them holding hands and playing fetch with him. The Alan throws the toy to far and it goes into the woods. The dog doesn’t come back for a couple minutes. Marie goes to check on him. She calls him and hears a dog whine. She runs to it and finds her dog dead. Above him, is Luke bloody from the dog. He smiles and says, “I’ve missed you Marie.”
The end.
           


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